Basil hallaward écrit une lettre a son ami pour expliquer la reaction qu'a au Dorian Gray devant le portrait qu'il venait de peindre.
Voila j'ai fait ma rédaction mais j'aimerais avoir une correction car je suis pas vraiment bonne en Anglais :)
J'ai essayer de faire le maximum de phrase toute seule et après je me suis aider d'un traducteur ^^
My dear friend,
I finally finished painting that I spoke for a long time, that of Dorian Gray.
After many hours I put in the paint I'm very proud of the result!
It reflects quite the beauty of this young boy!
I invite you to come see her before she to leave because I'd like to display in a gallery.
I offered a Dorian, my model but I think new paint!
I'll tell you the reaction he had to paint because he saw it once completed.
After about a four hours, I stopped painting.
-Is it really finished? Dorian murmured, stepping down from the platform.
-Quite finished, I replied.
Dorian made no answer, but passed listlessly in front of his picture and turned towards it.
When he saw it he drew back, and his cheeks flushed for a moment with pleasure.
I saw in his eyes that he was happy, , as if he had recognized himself for the first time.
For him it was the revelation of her beauty
He was so dumb he was surprised the final result.
He spent a long minute to contemplate such Narcissus when he saw his reflection in the water.
After this long silence he turned to me and said that was very proud of the result and display it with pride in him!
He even offered to give me a receipt to show to everyone!
After this brilliant idea we organize this gala which I invite you!
I hope you're the, all my FRIENDESHIPS.
Merci de votre aide :)