Bonjour, je dois écrire un petit conte en anglais et le moderniser, je dois utiliser le prétérit be + ing, le passperfect et le + que parfait.
j'ai deja écrit mon texte mais je n'arriva pas a intégrer les temps qui me sont demandé :$
Pouvez vous m'aider et en même temps corriger mon texte ?
merci de votre aide :)
Once upon a time, 12 knocks of midnight rang when cendrillon left the nightclub on its motorcycle hastily and let are portable in the bar.
Not wanting to go home, She arrived to a very beautiful house.
She returned in.
The house, was very big, it brought in and found packagings of pizza on the table, there was 3.
She decided to taste the pizza.
She don’t like that in the cheese nor that in the fish but but she loved the ham-cheese.
After eating she decided to test beds
On was too hard, the other soft and the other perfect.
She was sleeping when the 3 living arrived.
They saw that someone had eaten pizza and what a girl sleeping in bed.
They immediately telephoned the police arrived.
They stopped Cinderella and put him in prison for 24 hours.
This is her Fairy-Godmother who went to look for that it does not come to scold his step-mother.
Arriving home she met the young man who had found the day before his phone.
She invited him in and got to know, they were not married and had no children because she left 1 month after to another man.
She said it was her prince charming.